What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
It is irrefutable to say the world has benefited immensely in the last century because of the technological advancement. Certainly, there are myriad inventions this era has to offer and among which computer technology has the domination. So, in this following essay I will be discussing about the salient discoveries concerning about the technical advancements and deduce to a conclusion after mentioning its boon in the modern society.
To begin with, we have used computes for multitasking purposes from many years now, whether it’s home, schools or banks its use has overgrown tremendously, because of its accuracy and efficiency. Also, computes have plethora use in media and communication sector which enable us to connect to anyone in the world instantly. For instance, tedious mathematical problems, or the records of employee in organization or the paperless transactions, only because of the computers one can achieve those. So, there are immense propitious of computers.
Furthermore, computes with the programmable software, internet, and addition of artificial intelligence has created technological revolution. For instance, according to the New York Times billions of dollars are invested in Silicon Valley for development of new technology. The repercussion of that has resulted in colossal technical advancement, which has made world a better place to live.
To recapitulate, it’s not an easy task to judge any invention, but the computers with integration of programmable software has contributed in medical and making advancement in the airline sector immensely. Undoubtedly, computes are one of the best inventions that has made human life comfortable and easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67450980392 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30068439771 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7317055104 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120310104534 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040760206028 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339716366634 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683898850846 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202610458049 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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