fast food has increased problems in society . Discuss.
It is irrefutable to say that the busy lifestyle gravitate people of this generation towards the instant food. Being the unseperable part, it is causing mostly negative impact on the todays lifestyle rather than positive. The following essay will discuss both sides of having instant food and deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, life of todays generation is on fast pace and people donot want to wate their valuabe time on cooking food. Cooking, at times is tedious so rather than spending time on cooking people love to spend time with their loved ones and visit places. Growing trend of fast food resturant and them being occupied by the masses even during the weekdays is the best example of people following the fast food culture.Moreover, discouraging people and not letting them fall in the fallacy of wrong advertisement of fast foood should be carried out.
People on the other side of the fence assert that, having a healthy meal is the best way to deal with myriad diseases that happens due to unhealthy and unhygenic food of fast food resturants. Fried,oily, unhealthy and unhygenic instant foods are causing life threatning diseases in many people . According to WHO, the number of people opting for fast food has grown tremendously not only in developed countries , but also in developing countries.
To recapitulate, instant food has become inseperable pasrt of our society, so opting for healthy alternatives rather than the unhealthy should be promoted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nstant food. Being the unseperable part, it is causing mostly negative impact on ...
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...s causing mostly negative impact on the todays lifestyle rather than positive. The fol...
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...enic food of fast food resturants. Fried,oily, unhealthy and unhygenic instant foods ...
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...ies , but also in developing countries. To recapitulate, instant food has become...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13991769547 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75489341614 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572016460905 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9473384251 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20570539212 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861186617604 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567498474463 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11777022506 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437291924123 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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