Is it true that conformity almost always leads to a deadening of individual creativity and energy? Is non-conformity almost always to be welcomed?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
There is an ongoing argument regarding the issue on conformity which leads to diminishing people's creativity and enthusiasm. While others believe that non-conformity should also be accepted. In my perspective, this should be a matter of trying to experience the uncommon for continuous learning. This essay will discuss my reasons for agreeing with the latter statement.
To begin with, any individual is inclined to experience deviation from his surroundings. This must be a training ground for him to obtain wisdom and experience after not complying with the standards of the society. Learning from past mistakes can be rewarding sometimes as it is the way for people to realize the best method or technique to solve any problem. To illustrate, many useful discoveries during the past decades are not actually planned but a result of an accident. This is perhaps the advantage of venturing into non-conforming aspects of life to be more artistic and giving one's greatest effort to mitigate difficulties the next time of encounter.
Moreover, it can be said that it also a means to be more innovative. A person who is not satisfied with his output will look for ways to improve it. Consequently, he would be able to extract wonderful ideas and thoughts from his mind just to be excellent in accomplishing a task. For example, an artist must be outlandish in the nature of his works as this will make him different from the others of the same field. The infinite possibilities can be realized if one is open to unconforming truth of life.
To recapitulate, people would not always go for perfection in terms of following the standards. A creative mind and bountiful energy can be sustained if one is ready to accept what is unpopular in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hing peoples creativity and enthusiasm. While others believe that non-conformity shou...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'ones the greatest'.
Suggestion: ones the greatest
... of life to be more artistic and giving ones greatest effort to mitigate difficulties the nex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98299319728 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00793565322 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8204857806 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188127255113 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635553363946 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344007836244 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117799961644 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296841325043 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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