Some people think law changes human behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?
The crime rate in human society has been upsurged drastically which is imbalancing society culture. This significant imbalance in human behaviour can be set by powerful rules which is a natural process to commence the change in human behaviour and pay a vital role for mankind society. This essay will elaborate the positive and negative impact of law on human behaviour with a supported example.
First and foremost, to curb the crime in society a significant law and heavy penalties has to be imposed by political or law-governed authorities on lawbreaker which would result in a panic in criminal. This fear will combat their mind for any next attempt. For example, a heavy fine or imprisonment has to be urged on vehicle owner after breaking traffic rules. This will be pathbreaking for a traffic violation and will set a clear example for other riders. This change in regulation with a massive fine or short term prison would boost the human behaviour in a positive manner.
On the flip side, sometimes imposing strict law mistakenly create a monster in human. This strict law results in a dangerous impact on the human on his mantel condition which is detrimental to the society.
Overall, i reckon that the there are myriad merits of law on human behaviour which outweighs the demerits.
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...detrimental to the society. Overall, i reckon that the there are myriad merits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, as to, for example, i reckon
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97706422018 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73917746303 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4008837151 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6363636364 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195604796457 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846836565861 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638449232036 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144184446045 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447330375103 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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