You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir,
Last week, I celebrated my birthday in your hotel and I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for making party enjoyable.
Overall, I consider the whole party as properly arranged and people enjoyed fully, especially the music evening where singer sung the on-demand songs and fulfilled my guest’s expectation. It was difficult to believe that orchestra was common for all guests belonging to other parties as they took more than five requests from my group only and thoroughly entertained. Besides music, people also like the food, both starter and main course, one of my friend said that ‘Paneer Tikka’ was sumptuous and garlic sauce was awesome in taste. I came to place little early and precisely observed the lightening and it was perfect for small parties.
There are couples of things which I would like to be more perfect. Firstly, the seating arrange in food area. For indoor birthday party, I think that chairs should be placed in row rather than in start combination. Secondly, though it was buffet, people had to wait for curries at counter.
I hope that my advice would be helpful in effective organizing the parties.
I am looking forward to meet you next sometime.
Yours faithfully,
PONA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Last week, I celebrated my birthday in y...
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Line 6, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...zing the parties. I am looking forward to meet you next sometime. Yours faithfully, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06310679612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63928159418 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68932038835 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2604928485 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9166666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152400201473 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504218341371 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433756722339 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701093225726 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506145862497 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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