Now a days, Many families have both parents working. some working parents believe other family members like grand parents can take care of their children, while other think child centers provide the best care. Disscuss both views and gives your opinion.

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Now a days, Many families have both parents working. some working parents believe other family members like grand parents can take care of their children, while other think child centers provide the best care. Disscuss both views and gives your opinion.

In this modren era, Most of the both parents are engaged in working outside and they rely on other family members to raise their offsprings, but some assert that child care centers have better baby sitter skills.here, This essay will discuss both both sides.

First and foremost, the grand parents have a lot of experience to take care od wards. They have already nurtured their own offsprings.grand parents have more patience and they have better skills.they know how to calm their youngster when they cry. Furthermore, Under the observation of grand parents child can learn various things such as, how to give respect to others. how to make strong relationship with elder.grandparents are helpful to provide knowledge about their culture.children are be learned etiquettes.such as, hospitality, well behaviour towards others. Apart of this grand parents get a optimum opportunity to spend a lot of time with their offsprings.grand parents as well as children do not feel lonliness.

On the other hand, Child care centers have best employees who are professional in baby care provider skills.they are trained in task of nurture of infaint babies. In baby care organisation youngster get delicious food equipped with various nutrients.In many critical situation, If child get injured them self, then they immidiatly recue the child because they already trained in furst-aid skills. Additionally they are develop self confidence and social behaviour in the kids.when other same aged kids comes wih their peers.then children can boost their communication skills by interact with them.

In my opinion, both have its own significations, grand parents can be proved best baby- minder because of their experience.grand parents should be appericiate for all efforts to taking care of their offsprings.

In conclusion, There has a trust issues.parents believe on their family members because they know elder can take care in better ways.however some people depends on child care centers to raise their child's manners. because child care organisation have well qualified persons.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44891640867 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06254708748 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8599644351 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421213787052 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167645015004 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858142762542 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254801107425 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053623057987 0.056905535591 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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