Old workers often retire at the age of 60 or 65. Some people say that workers should be allowed to work as long as they want to. What is your opinion?
Recently, the phenomenon of retirement age limit and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of allowing workers to work till they get retired, such issue is regarded thoroughly constructive and positive by enormous individuals. I am inclined to believe that not setting any retirement age limit can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
At the outset, an old worker who works to survive not to save so that he or she can fulfill their family needs on daily basis. Such workers need to work day and night and sometimes beyond their age limit wherein allowing them to work is an essential gift to them. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered that people work day and night to meet their daily requirements and they are not able to save anything for their retirement. Thus, they are in need of working all the time to survive and to be alive.
On the flip side, people who do not need to work at their old age, they can surely take retirement from their duties and enjoy being with family by utilizing the fund which they have saved while working. Moreover, people who had retirement plans and insurance can leverage the benefits and avoid working at old age.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that taking retirement should be up to the person as it depends on his or her financial conditions, not to be decided by any rules or restriction. So, permitting old workers to work until the time they want definitely outweigh its demerits. Thus, positive aspects of working as per their needs should be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66382530664 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4667067308 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317089047407 0.242375264174 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124926592171 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463555269216 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199758962531 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257318646439 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.