Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Human beings enjoy celebrating and honor various events and other people who had a great influence on world, during and after their lives. These celebrations can be noticed all over the globe, no matter the country, having thousands of years of history. If I were in the position to create a new holiday, I would definitely chose to celebrate the nature, due to the fact that it represents the source of our existence. It should last around one week, and all the population of the Earth ought to be involved. I will explain my statement in the following essay.
First and foremost, the celebration called "Resurgence Week", lasts one week and people have to be actively involved in it, giving a new definition of what "celebrate" means. Instead of celebrating by drinking, eating, dancing and spending time with fellows and relatives, this week has to be about the refreshment of the environment. In other words, individuals should commemorate this by making positive movements such as planting trees, volunteering for cleaning the garbage, the plastic from woods and surroundings and so forth. Moreover, children have to be also involved in order to understand Earth's importance and to promote a cleaner world. Therefore, it is essential that every person should leave his mark on the movement, no matter their race, occupation etc. For instance, people should be given free paid days from work, so as they could take part in these actions. Consequently, bonds between humans get stronger and a purpose unity is created.
To continue with, mas-media has to contribute to this as well, by continuously broadcasting documentaries about protecting nature, and during this week, every Internet website or television channel should stop from showing other types of entertainment. Therefore, media has the opportunity to raise awareness about pollution, climate change, green house effect and thus reach every corner of the planet. Resurgence Week has to be only about our home, planet, ecosystem, environment, about the most unique, livable place from our galaxy. Its purpose is to make people understand that we have to protect it by all means, because there is no other place where to go.
To summarize, it is vital for people to create a celebration like the aforementioned one. This is because they will have the chance to contribute to an efficient global motion, that has as main purpose saving every livings' and non-livings' home, which is Terra. Since it is worldwide event it has to last one week, and every aspect of the society must be involved, because only by acting like this everybody learn to value the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...reate a new holiday, I would definitely chose to celebrate the nature, due to the fac...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion called 'Resurgence Week', lasts one week and people have to be act...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...anet, ecosystem, environment, about the most unique, livable place from our galaxy. Its pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12933025404 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93198686856 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575057736721 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7027495379 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.894736842 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7894736842 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119008765394 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372378864983 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522817497358 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769314100846 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526403817535 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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