some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt arranging sprors and games are very hard work any nation that brings burden financially. However, hosting county will get good competitive advantages. I think that, although it has certain financial pressure, it has positive impact that over come the nagitive effects.
On the one side, some citizens believe that organizing huge events leads to county downside in economically. In detail, while arranging these kind of events, counties will not look at cost they try to impress all over world, as a result they spend billions of money on events. Moreover, a lot of will waste in this process. For instance, China spent almost 3 billions on Olympic events in 2008 and there were so much corruption while spending on it. To add to this, the arrangements were not useful after event completion, so did not get returns on it. Finally,due to these kind of consequences, some people think that arranging huge sports event brings problems.
On the other side, some people say that these huge events bring attention of the total world, so it leads to make the good results in future. In other words, it is the best time to show off about the nation and culture, it may brings the investors into county to start their organizations. Moreover, these events show the employment to so many people and increase the demand on county products due to tourists and visitors. As a result, the hosting county can make money and it will solve some budget issues. Thus, hosting county has more advantages than disadvantages.
To sum up, organizing big events such as Olympics nothing but investing a lot, so nation should understand this and plan the constructions carefully. As well as, those sport stages should be reusable in other local events. If plan properly, counties can overcome the financial problems and will get long term benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Suggestion: , due
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.961414791 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62183900418 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6058983124 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7647058824 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1176470588 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159794476013 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547293418211 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568943008472 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921104166824 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405354657537 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.