Does television removes our loneliness or not? Discuss.
It is irrefutable to say that invention of television was mainly for entertainment purpose. Many opine this invention has wasted fruitful time of individuals, while others oppose to that notion. This essay will discuss positive and negative aspects of television and deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with,being the luxury in the early 2oth century; television has now reached myriad households. Not only housewife, elderly or childrens it is a friend and information provider with news updated every moment. For instance, different channels provide varieties of information, and there is everything for every one. From cookery shows to news or cartoons to daily programs.
People on the other side of the fence assert that, television has corrupted the young brains, because school going children spend much of their time in front of televison. This way more of their productive time is wasted in television and they are gaining very less. To exemplify, acccording to survey in 2000 a child spend 20 more hours a week on television than allocated. These type of sedantary lifestyle in children are causing fatal health problem.
To recapitulate, having immense benefits in the modern era , television has at times faced allegation of being time killer and bad influence on people. Despite of the blame, television are the greatest invention of the 20th century, not only killing loneliness but providing immense information from all around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34051724138 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85974138655 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650862068966 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1232832295 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147577787042 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476976465866 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448864159855 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837059606247 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033527138631 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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