People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons of this?
Recently, the phenomemnon of combining the private and the working life and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Altough, this combination is beneficial as it regarded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that mixing these issues together has catastrophic effects on inhabitants' lives.
From a social standpoint, the combination of personal life with the conditions of working has several disadvantages. These drawbacks are rooted in the fact of unconcentration. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the main causes of confrontations among families. One of the most significant factors was the effects of bringing the work consequences into families, and it was quite bold for celebrities and well-known citizens. Furthermore, this survey showed dwellers who mixed these both situations together had little amount of some crucial subjects than others including freedom, concentration, success and privateness.
On the one hand, there is no doubt mixing the working conditions with personal living has some adherents. They argued that they can manage all circumstances and avoid problems by managing the conditions.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the demerits of the combination of personal living with working condition are far more outweigh its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72888888889 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27774689251 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.122159746 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084403615113 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031504046051 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320141450064 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478465980608 0.151781067708 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399652650657 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 12.6369458128 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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