The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
Recently, the phenomenon of determining the first priority of the governments's duty has sparked a heated debate among the populations. Although the substantial numbers of individuals believe that the increasing the rate of population growth is the most fundamental topic to address, others strongly believe that the air pollution is the most drastic issue for each nation. I am inclined to believe that this issue is paramount and has catastrophic impacts on the earth.
From a socail standpoint, there are several reasons why air pollution has deterimental effects on our lives. These demerits are rooted in the fact of industrialism. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these demerits. Firstly, the air pollution has striaght influence on the health. An array of diseases have increased recent years including the cardiovascular ones which are quite hazardous and need to a considerable amount of time, money and energy to tackle. Furthermore, this phenomenon leads to climate change and creates some problematic issues including the raise in the sea level, drought, increasing the earth's temperature and some destructive hurricanes.
In addition, not only the air pollution has drastic influence on human life, but also it has some catastrophic impacts on animals and plants. Namely, due to increasing some specific diseases or the influence on water, a considerable number of them are endangered.
In conclusion, while there are several laibilities which are quite essential for each government to tackle, I profoundly believe that the air pollution and its corresponding impacts are the most crucial task that all organizations and associations must focus on them.
- Whether experimental learning can work well in formal education, agree or disagree? 88
- Whether experimental learning can work well in formal education, agree or disagree? 11
- Whether experimental learning can work well in formal education, agree or disagree? Or Experience is a more effective way to teach, compared to books? Agree or disagree. 85
- Cities are now expanding the government should make a better network for public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership Agree or Disagree 11
- Cities are now expanding the government should make a better network for public transport or should build more roads to facilitate car ownership Agree or Disagree 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
... the sea level, drought, increasing the earths temperature and some destructive hurric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5037037037 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15093558514 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7999469214 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769161097588 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233202533075 0.0925447433944 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362703426927 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514375046126 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444243994611 0.0609392437508 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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