How widely of you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
Recently, the phenomenon of allocating too much time for the jobs instead of being in our own families has sparked a heated debate. Although working hours are significant and everyone should go to work as they regrded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others argued that inhabitants should have a balance between the working hours and the time that they are in their own families. Iam inclined to believe that having too much working hours have some catastrophic effects on our lives.
From a social standpoint, being at work for long hours instead of being at home has some disadvantages. These drawbakcs are rooted in the fact of tiredness. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the causes of not being at home. Firstly, everyone is quite tired by being long time at work and they cannot provide happiness in their houses. Due to these dull hours they often have some confrontations. Furthermore, when a father or mother is not in their families, the youths certainly have lack of love. In addition, by spending too much hours at work the responsibility of upbringing the kids is not done ideally.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of being at work more than at home has some adherents. They argued that living particularly in new and modern cities has high expenditures. Providing all facilities and accessibilities for every family is quite difficult and the people who have poorly paid jobs are forced to spend extra time to earn more mone in order to meet their initial necessities.
In conclusion, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I believe that the demerits of being extra time at work is more outwiegh its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92976588629 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85745979032 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8304811318 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173812020228 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616712023414 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441740559002 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110606347873 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261403300354 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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