Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are most likely to get a satisfying career life than who frequently change their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A tight argue between the advocates and the skeptics are whether loyalty in certain jobs will give a satisfying career life or not. I personally think that both views have strong arguments regarding such issue. In this essay, I would like to elaborate what kind factors these issues will occur.
First and foremost, the salary in a workplace is the main reason whether the employments keep stay in their jobs or move on. Most of the people are likely to switch, naturally, from low-wage company to better or high-waged company. No one will stay with the same salary while social needs are increasing the time by time. Secondly, those who frequently change their jobs is always facing a sentiment of the workforce from their new firm. They should manage their attitude among local forces so their environment could accept them very well. To those who failed deal with this, they sometimes resign more early and trying to find new jobs as comfortable as they could. Eventually, they are not satisfied with their career life.
On the contrary, the people who choose to stay in certain jobs gain trust from their environment and their boss too. They keep stay longer, sometimes, get a promotion to the better position in a company and following with high salary as well. For instance, seven from ten-person tend to stay in the certain job due to the environment and clear career path rather than they have to readapt as well as uncertainty position in the new firm. Hence, they will get fruitful when they are able to be patient.
To sum up, the salary redundant plays important role in daily life. But, in order to achieve a good career – such as higher position and good workplace – the loyalty of employment is likely to result in job satisfaction in the career. Therefore, when we are running to stay with certain jobs professionally, so all of the things in career life can be obtained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ay with certain jobs professionally, so all of the things in career life can be obtained. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78419452888 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47972907241 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2267985437 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5882352941 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283508675933 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883383576892 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061887914958 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161946315012 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430184513515 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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