You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 150 words.
Reply to an advertisement for the post of a mechanic in a workshop.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for the post of a mechanic in your workshop. Yesterday, I saw an advertisement in the newspaper which talks about the qualification and the experience required for post. I believe that I am fulfilling both criteria.
Firstly on qualification, I am diploma holder in automotive branch and completed this diploma around two years back i.e. June 2016 and following that I commenced to work as trainee in M/S Tata Motors where I learned the major parts assembling, various kinds of repairs. I worked in Tata Motors for six months.
About the job experience, I joined the formal job in ‘Maruti which produces luxury car in India and abroad in January 2018. Initially, I was placed in quality department where I learned the tools and technique used to inspections and testing. Thereafter, I was shifted to production department where I was assigned the mechanic role on production belt which mainly covers the task related to assembling and engine fitment. In totality, I have around 2 years of work experience which is one of the pre-requisite for representing the candidature.
I hope that I shall be able to perform at your workshop provided chance is given and will not let down the expectations.
Yours faithfully
Chama
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to apply for th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...kshop. Yesterday, I saw an advertisement in the newspaper which talks about the q...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00938967136 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04047794937 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615023474178 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6207485833 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145737995088 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568708906671 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740120575431 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903634557332 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856372879074 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.