Some parents buy a lot of toys for their children.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's materialistic world the children like to have several toys in their surrounding to fulfill their needs their parents buy a plethora of toys for them.As every garden has weeds as same as the toys have the merits and demerits.This essay will discuss firstly,it helps to boost the cognitive development as main advantage and secondly,it brings psychological and behavioral impacts as the foremost disadvantage,follwed by a reason conclusion.
The principle advantage is that there are various kind of toys available in the market which plays an remarkable role in helping the kids to know about the colours,puzzles block buildings etc.Also there are many types of alphabetical toys.These toys enhance the ability of understanding the sequence of about what the game is demanding and what exactly it is.A prime instance,a pre-schooler kids come in contact with the vast range of toys in creches houses that has proven to be help their mental and cognitive ability.
On the flipside,the toys hve some disadvantages,As we see tge gadgets are being polished and increasing enormously which also known as the part of kids games because they emphasized on these videogames throughout the entire day which leds to negative ramifications and parents try to stop them playing with these games and makes children behaviour too aggressive and also reflets their psychological level.
In conclusion,the toys are the first preference of the kids and have many negative impacts.while doing selection of toys parents must ensure that their children must not get into it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33870967742 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1655254712 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.123946973 49.4020404114 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.0 106.682146367 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.0 20.7667163134 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.25 7.06120827912 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285006508351 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166324591422 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665008770219 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166324591422 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665008770219 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.7 13.0946893788 265% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.3 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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