You are planning to go on holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter:
1) Why you need a holiday?
2) What your plans are?
3) Why you need your friend to join with you?
Dear Igor,
I hope the letter find you in the best of health. I am writing to pursue you to join me on an exotic vacation to to Croatia. It is one of the upcoming destinations of Europe. Allow me to elaborate.
A long period of time has passed from the last time we went to travel together. We both had committed to travel to Croatia in 2015, but the same could not be fructified due one reason or the other. However, now with a long weekend and taking 2 days of holidays, you and I can head out to Croatia for a week. This is an offseason for my company and I am sure you can accommodate during this time of the year.
I spoke to a travel company and they have quoted me a sum of Rs. 87,000/- plus tax for one week escapade to Croatia. The tour will start from Zagreb (2 days), Split (3 days), Brac and Hvar (1 day each). We will be flying back home from Split.
Furthermore, I am not willing to accept a negative reply. I am sure you are more than willing to go being a Games of Throne fan and further to fulfill your end of the promises.
The ball is in your court now.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ue you to join me on an exotic vacation to to Croatia. It is one of the upcoming dest...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...urope. Allow me to elaborate. A long period of time has passed from the last time we went t...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a game' or simply 'Games'?
Suggestion: a game; Games
...e you are more than willing to go being a Games of Throne fan and further to fulfill yo...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09589041096 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27843357706 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0665322578 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.8 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172985328283 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589860596881 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673755567013 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100779396773 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616133583692 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.