In some countries the average weight and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Being healthy is became new tread in our lives though few countries are still lagging behind resultant excessive weight and fitness are steadily increased. There are numerous causes, this essay intends to analyse the various aspects along with couple of ways to resolve this detrimental issue.
To embark upon, unhealthy food habit. In today’s lifestyle easy cooking and fast food took over the healthy Food habits which generally play a major role for controlling the weight. For instance, there is a family in my neighbourhood where both parents are working and has less time to cook, so they generally make quick food or ordered fast food outcome her daughter became obesity. This can be resolved through following healthy food habits or cutting down the malign food.
Additionally, busy schedule plays major role in decreasing the interest towards fitness. These days everybody is over occupied with work that never got chance to focus on health. For illustrative, there was a survey conducted in Jan 2018 in America with working people including men and women, 69% of people are busy in their daily work live and ignoring any kind of workout, which eventually leading to unhealthy way of acting. Hence, individual needs to be balance between work and physical fitness. Also, by joining some physical activity club.
To recapitulate, there could be many reasons towards destructive issue but to resolve these everyone should focus on their day-to-day lives and the side effect which generate major diseases. Furthermore, such physical activities like gym, yoga etc. active the brain, increase happiness and productive. Hence, all need to love our body and lives to take one step towards nourishing lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Being healthy is became new tread in our lives though few count...
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Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this everyone' or ''?
Suggestion: this everyone;
...owards destructive issue but to resolve these everyone should focus on their day-to-day lives ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28727272727 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57515144383 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6069981595 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706978032638 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231425851653 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313581949477 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442934497802 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020594952872 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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