An increasing number of people choose to study and work in big cities. What are advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of the tending of many people to study and work in big cities and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although, contested by many that living in big cities is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of people. I am inclined to believe that this kind of thinking can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin whit, there are various reasons to support this kind of living style. At first, living in large cities have some disadvantages such as wasting times in crowded streets and highways every day. However, our children can study in the better situation than the countryside. The students can use the modern facilities in the cities. For example, the universities in large cities have recent educational technologies which help to teach sciences in best situation.
In addition, one another of disadvantages with living in big cities is costly living. But, in opposition, the salaries are too high. The people tend to work in big cities due to more income to fulfill their families. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2016 has shown that a significant number of educated people go to cities to find more opportunities in jobs whit higher salary.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on choosing to study and work in large cities, I profoundly believe that the benefits of this act is far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0796812749 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90981244416 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7771364545 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252167683577 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780384249226 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617007312544 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149166696122 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499783748439 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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