Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advent of internet, lot of new avenues were opened for people in form which they communicate and share information with each other. Most popular of them are the sundry social websites like Facebook, Twitter etcetra. These platforms have ubiquitous influence on people of all age groups and their users are increasing at an exponential rate. But nowadays there is debate going on various news channel and in people that information shared on these media is not secure and can be acquired by any company easily. But in my opinion, I think still the advantages of social media overshadow its disadvantages.
To embark on, the social media has revolutionized the means by which people used to communicate. Firstly, people can talk to their friends and families at very fast speed and it does not cost too high, what people need is an internet connection and smart phone or laptop. Secondly, on websites like Facebook, people can create accounts and friends , they can share photographs on it. The fascinating thing about it is that one can get instant reaction from kith and kins that are online. Hence, the social media has played he role of bridging gap between friend and relative who are apart thousands of miles.
Every thing has its two side, if there is shining side, there will be a dark side also and same is the case with social websites. Though they many advantages, but they are closely followed by disadvantages too. The most serious issue with these platforms and which haunt the people most is theft of personal information and data. There are thousands of cases in which information of people , like email id's , credit credential were leaked to some other platforms that misused them. Secondly, the content that people used see on their platforms was also manipulated to influence there thoughts during voting in some countries , questioning the credibility of such websites.
To conclude, I would reiterate my decision that advantages of these media eclipses the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05120481928 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6759097225 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9711173366 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233123280686 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810069425417 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07308467837 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146520127723 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782322661354 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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