What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
With the advancement in the technology and other trend, more and more people are moving to the cities from the rural area. There are more benefits of living in the big cities compared to the rural areas has created the chaos. Some people believe that living in the big cities has beneficial compared to the rural area. However, I strongly believe that there are more profits of living in the cities in terms of lifestyle and amenities. This essay will further deliver both positive and negative sides before jumping to the conclusion.
There are myriad benefits of living in the big cities but the most conspicuous one is there are more focal facilities available in the city like employment, education, children upbringing, and many more. In addition, in cities, one can live with full liberty and current trend. For instance, as per the recent survey by the local newspaper, there are many people who are moving to the cities and there is a significant increase in the selling of new apartment.
However, there are also shortcomings exist with the above positive sides. Firstly, in the city people are having a lifestyle as if they are middle-of-the-road. Secondly, they are not living with the liberty and not allow others to live with the liberty. Going ahead, in a rural area, there are no basic facilities available like the transport, medical, and so on.
In the view of the above points, it is noticeable that living in cities is more beneficial rather than in the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88976377953 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62758630846 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48031496063 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5543787187 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225010106855 0.242375264174 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951090039564 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911642503228 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132674140708 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626763999206 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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