Some people use Technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing a doctor. what are the reasons behind this phenomenon? is this a positive or negative development according to you?
The internet is often used for taking the medical advice instead of Consulting with a physician. Shortage of doctors and their exorbitant consultation fees are the main contributory factors for this trend, and in my opinion, it is a detrimental development.
A major pertinent reason behind preferring Technology for getting the information regarding diagnosis and treatment of an ailment is the abysmal patient-doctor ratio. In other words, doctors are in the dearth due to which patients have to wait for a long time to get an appointment, which prolongs their recovery period and aggravates their suffering. Besides this, it is an economical method because physicians charge an exorbitant fee for their services, and it often becomes arduous for patients to pay for it. Therefore, they take help from forums, articles and researches which are available on the internet for diagnosing maladies they are suffering from and finding treatment for it.
I would argue that using an online source of information is an inappropriate approach to know about various aspects of a disease because it could exacerbate the health problems. To illustrate, it is imperative to conduct the physical examination and laboratory tests for confirming the particular disease, finding its causes and an effective treatment. However, when people opt for online websites for getting cured, they often acquire wrong information because symptoms of a disease are different according to the age, gender, physiology and psychology of a person. As a result, they often consume wrong medicines, which may cause multifarious side effects. for example, an individual can suffer from a headache owing to various reasons such as stress, weakness, tumours, and taking similar kind of analgesics, such as Trigon D, prescribed on the internet to get relief could further aggravate the situation.
To conclude, even though it is convenient for people to take the medical help through online sources, I consider it to be disastrous for their health, as it could cause various side effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35802469136 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96341946072 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7800956065 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213288934918 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855823484579 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528471991858 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1491314937 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501329217778 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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