Writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
When you started to use bicycle to go to work
What the problem is
Suggesting the solution of the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing letter to bring it in to your cognizance about the parking problem in our building.
I recently purchased a bicycle for commuting to my office because it is the most doable way to reach my workplace. The other reason for buying cycle was that I was also provided space for parking it, which I never used before. But, after buying cycle, when I went to park it, the site was preoccupied. Due to which I have to lift my cycle all the way up to my room, because no other alternative.
I also left the written note on the cycle of the person who use my space, but it proved to be just a futile effort because the cycle is still parked there. Therefore, I would request you to kindly identify the person through CCTV cameras installed the parking and ask him to not vacate my parking space.
Hope, you will find a quick solution to my problem.
Thanking You
Yours sincerely
Harry Sandhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing letter to bring it in to yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49704142012 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34765876952 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.878739535 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195637092008 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089686211561 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805992075794 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155269623905 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935229685253 0.0580467560999 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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