Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development; however, others think the social value is lost as a result of economic development. To what extend do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh its disadvantages?
It has been controversial whether focusing mainly on economic system would damage the social value in many countries. In my opinion, I believe that the benefits gained from this economic development outweigh sufficiently the disadvantages.
To begin with, there are a few drawbacks when countries only concentrate on their economy. As governments decide to pay more attention on making the most profit for their budget, the rising proportion of low-income people would be left out and not be seriously accounted. Consequently, the morality in this aspect is certainly downgraded. Another setback of economic-oriented development is that such system would increase the gap between the rich and the poor. Most individuals who involve in countries’ large businesses are likely the ones to receive higher profit, which means these people will get richer while the poor stays the same. As a result, these negative sides set the social value to a lower level.
Fortunately, this system still deliver positive impacts on people’s life standard to some extent. Firstly, enriching the economy will result in more money which will then be used to create more jobs or sponsored the public health care and education for the residents. This means the poor society is receiving the subsequent effect of the economic development to support their living standard. Secondly, with a stronger economy, governments have the reason to reduce taxes imposing on the residents. Thus, low-income households are now somewhat more relieved from the money burden. To sum up, every single person will be beneficial from the economic development.
In conclusion, I believe the advantages of concentrating on making more profit of many countries around the world win over its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44565217391 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02786497199 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4713586256 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.2 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192585430659 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624666556062 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558617902795 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117825779748 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427356522257 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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