appearance isn't everything. discuss
It is true that appearance does not suffice everything however it is an individual’s inner beauty that counts. You will see a number of magazine and TV programs touting about this particular issue still outer appearance is given more weight age.
Ironically, society acknowledges how superficial it is to judge by appearance. 'Don't judge book by its cover' and 'looks can be deceptive' are two common lines that support this belief. In spite of this we place an enormous emphasis on physical appearance often giving less thought to an individual’s inner beauty.
Individuals with good physical appearance are often seen as strong personality and knowledgeable. In contrary to this, you will find a lot of examples around you such as Barack Obama, he is second black president in US and is known for his leadership skills and is also one of the most influential president in the history of US. Another example is Jack Ma, who is one of the most sought entrepreneur in the world is famous for his will power, dedication and believing in himself. He is now one of the richest man in China.
On the other hand, it is also important to be presentable. You must have heard 'first impression is the best impression' which is very much true. A person dressed shabbily will definitely lose a lot of opportunities to a person dressed smartly. Smartly dressed along with good personality is definitely a win-win situation for anyone.
In conclusion, we live in a judgmental society where physical appearance is favored more. Society should definitely bear this is in mind that physical appearance is not permanent and in long run it is an individual’s inner beauty and characteristics that will remain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...perficial it is to judge by appearance. Dont judge book by its cover and looks can b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, so, still, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12118230947 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.743080296 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114914234758 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398308704636 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529542075401 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742249121989 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552903416638 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.