A place where a person has grew up has an influence on his accomplishments.
To what extent do you agree or disagree. Explain your answer with examples.
The place where an individual has grown up plays a significant role in his life. It is argued that whether the place where an individual has brought up has an influence on his achievements or not. This essay will argue that the palce where a person has grew up has always a greater impact on his accomplishments.
To commence with, we all grew up at certain places in the world which has certain specialty to teach its people. It is very likely that a person learn a lot of lessons from the place he grew up. For instance, the environment in which he has spent his childhood days teaches him of etiquette, manner and moreover culture and tradition of that particular place that goes along with him lifelong. In brief, whatever a person achieves in his life is mostly because of the culture and ideology he has earned through his hometown place.
The place where we grow up surrounds us with the varieties of personality who are the source of several lessons in life. We come to interact with umpteen people in our lifetime and some plays a remarkable role in our life by teaching us many useful things. For instance, I have seen my father as my role model since my childhood because of his punctuality, integrity and his commitment towards his work, life, and responsibilities. Therefore, he teaches me these valuable things to follow in my life and that is why the place where we bought up always surrounds us with some quality people from whom we can learn many things.
This essay discussed how a place where one has grew up teaches us a life long lessons and also surrounds us with people from whom we can learn several things. In my opinion, a place where one has grown up has a greater influence on his accomplishments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...argue that the palce where a person has grew up has always a greater impact on his a...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...say discussed how a place where one has grew up teaches us a life long lessons and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in brief, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 5.94088669951 303% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 20.9802955665 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 310.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59677419355 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68475675519 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464516129032 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7106705662 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290308124581 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141370765978 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071023476325 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216159617976 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072940902771 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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