Task 2: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, participating in individual sports, especially football and hockey is said to provide far more benefits than joining in individual sports. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the arguments and give my opinion in the conclusion.
It is obvious that team sports offer a great deal of benefits. On the other hand, team sports contain many people from different class of society, meaning that players have opportunities to integrate fully with the other people. For example, there might be some players were born in wealthy families, while other participants came from lower class. However, they all were grouped with the same objective which is winning, enabling conversations as well as discussions about strategies to be established naturally. Furthermore, joining in sports group might allow new players to acquire skills of others with the aim of enhancing their abilities. To put it simply, the variety of skills, together with experience of each individual in a team are great sources for new comers to assimilate considerable knowledge.
In addition, the advantages of playing individual sports is undeniable. First of all, individual sports teach players how to be self – reliant. On condition that athletes expresses his or her desire to win, they have to depend on their own efforts, and they can not count on someone else carrying them through the competition. This teach them to be responsible for their own action and decisions. Secondly, individual sports allow athletes to compete at their own pace. For instance, when a young person determine to play karate or tennis, they would probably practice with people of a similar skill level. Thus, there is not as much pressure to keep pace with the other players.
In conclusion, although there are vast amounts of benefits of team sports, I believe that individual sports has their own advantages as well. In my opinion, it would be subjects to participants to decide which type of sports provide them with more advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[4]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'carries'.
Suggestion: carries
... and they can not count on someone else carrying them through the competition. This teac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14678899083 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78545096994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9551651844 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167209152183 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565606482087 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289571940632 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10658080199 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00472310046455 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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