The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Over a few decades, it has been observed that the ratio of crime has increased in many nations amongst the youth. Below discussed are a few reasons which lead the youth towards such kind of criminal activities as well as there are some solutions to overcome it.
To begin with, the main cause for crime in the youth is exposure to television. There are series and games which has violent programs. Due to less outdoor activity, youths watch shows and get inspired from them. For instance, during earlier times kids were involved in outdoor games which kept their minds occupied. As far as, today's generation is concerned they are intact to Laptop or television playing games which are not so youth friendly. Another reason is an increased level of competition and the urge to earn more. Due to less job opportunities youths remain unemployed. Hence, to fulfill their desires they commit sinful deeds like robbery, stealing, kidnapping and murder.
If, we want youths to be more responsible and mature, proper solution needs to be implemented.
Firstly, Government should make army training compulsory for kids aged 16 and above. Due to this training, they will become more disciplined, punctual and responsible. For example, as they grow into an adult they will be in a position to differentiate between what is right and wrong. Also, parents should keep a watch at the behaviour of their kids. Upbringing plays a vital role. Usually, it is observed that fathers are an idol for their son's. Hence, it is utmost important for fathers to teach their children on how to become a good citizen.
In conclusion, crimes happening in society committed by youths is a major growing concern but if all the elders and respective government take precautionary measures there will soon be an end to it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65310114023 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8439097302 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9473684211 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127285194976 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367979697231 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456986209296 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653788834948 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579108128013 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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