What is the best invention of last 100 years, the computer, antibiotics, the airplane, and explain why?
Recently, the phenomenon of defining the most significant inventions in the last century and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although there are several discussion to determine some medical inventions including cardiovascular pupils or antibiotics as a major invent, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that the Internet is the most paramount inverntion during the last century.
From a social standpoint, there are several reasons why the Internet is the most substantial invention in the recent years. These reasons are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the crucial effects of using the Internet. Firstly, the invention of the Internet leads to enhancing and developing the technology. An array of technological features have been creating and all of them make the life easier and more convinient. Furthermore, these modern features provide a considerable number of accessibilities for inhabitants. For instance, loads of banking services, the money transmosion, online consultations, online checking and some other examples like these.
On the one hand, the invention of airplane is the belief of a number of settlers as the most essential invention. They asserted that all kinds of travelling have become faster, easeir and more comfortable. In addtion, the cost of travelling including the business ones has diminished.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling argument to determine the most fundamental inventions in the last few centuries, I profoundly believe that the role of the Internet and is quite beneficial for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57528957529 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20745561156 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5148624783 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120983068512 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394366378004 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456141441192 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712642752569 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327873618478 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 55.0591133005 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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