You recently read an article in a newspaper about someone you know personally. You find some information wrong. Write a letter to editor inform him about it. Use following points:
What is the article about
What is the error
What expect an editor to do
Dear Sir,
I am an avid reader of your newspaper and I am writing this letter to apprise you about the mistake that I caught in an article published in your newspaper.
Sir, in yesterday's newspaper in editorial page there was an article about Mr. Harjeet Singh captain of junior hockey team of our country. As I have personal relationship, so I read that article with great interest and enthusiasm, and I found some facts mentioned in that article were inapt and distorted. One such information was about his education, it was written that he has to drop out from the school due to dearth of finance but he never gave up his studies. Secondly, initially his family never supported him in his game and wanted their son to focus on studies but in article it was totally obverse.
As a responsible citizen I thought I should bring it into your cognizance so that such error should occur in future, specially in prestigious newspaper like yours. Hence, I would request you to kindly to write a short not of apology in paper for this fault and in future kindly get information from trusted and authentic resources.
Hope, you will a kind attention toward this issue.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
HS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nizance so that such error should occur in future, specially in prestigious newspaper lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63820267961 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5102470661 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266650486505 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970746328571 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700925750013 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143015111559 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683694846804 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.