Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Susan,
Today is a sunny day and it reminds me to the time we had at Nha Trang. I am reviewing photos which you sent to me last week. How beautiful it is! do you agree with me that the seashore with golden sand and brilliant sunshine in all photos is so amazing. I wanna go back there immediately. I think that is attractive place to go in the summer.
Thank you for forwarding nice photos to me. Throwing out that your photographic technique were improved than before because the photos is so beautiful and artistic.
By the way, I also apologize about the lateness because I had to prepare for beginning of the school year examination. How about your school? I hope after fantastic holiday we all have the best start.
Give my thank to your parent because of attention while we were in Nha Trang. If you don't mind I wanna invite you and your parent to visit my country in recent times.
Your best friend,
Marry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...t to me last week. How beautiful it is! do you agree with me that the seashore wit...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tion while we were in Nha Trang. If you dont mind I wanna invite you and your parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45294117647 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43220178775 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9715014999 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2307692308 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319545920801 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104696367927 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786437162198 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171655209766 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355014547266 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.