Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned .To what extent to you agree at disagree?
In this modernization era, the adventure sports has been organized and it attract the people as well as makes a large benefit for such projects or shows. In recent years, the blood sports have become a hot topic for debate whereas, it create the anti social activities and also, impact the animal life. So, masses assert that these games should be banned or not? In my opinion, sports that includes any violence thing on people or animal always impact on people in bad ways.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the these sports are banned. The first and foremost is when the person has been bored unusual programmes then, these type of games was invented at that time these games are only use for entertainment and popularilty. Moreover, nowadays, these sports effected the psychological aspects about reletionship between the human and animals. To epitomise, now we see the lot of adventure program which show the blood sport and those people watch these type of sport their nature will be change to the other persons in this way, the humanity in the people are definitely decreased.
To continue with my view points, every populace and animals have their right to live with own way. As far as, it sports impact the environment because lot of animals die through these games and the animals have maintain the eco system. More pressingly, the banning such sports is not the answer, because these games not play in the open area.Anyway, people play it to gain the name and fame so, the government required legal safety standards in these games.
To conclude, I think each coin has to aspects these sports have some benefits while many demerits. It is well known that human beings prefer choosing fascinating kind of sport whether it has some bad influence. Furthermore, I against providing the competition of these games but if the government makes some rules so, these games have been less effected to the human and animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, while, as to, i think, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87048192771 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44572934536 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.366817713 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217488622079 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873927144077 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826060053553 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145452251665 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829192255077 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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