Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Lately, sports which involve life-threatening dangers for animals have become a topic of controversy. Educated population has now realized that such forms of entertainment are inhuman and barbaric towards the hapless animals and strongly believe that they should be made illegal. Although some people only look at it as a form of sport to be enjoyed, one must not forget that inflicting pain on others for our own pleasure is against the very essence of values' which we would like to instill in our children and therefore, in my opinion such sports must be banned by the law-makers.
People have varied tastes when it comes to how they prefer to relax. Some like indoor games while others are more physical and their tastes include watching live matches involving animals like Bull-fights. For them, it is just watching a game without really considering the pain and agony the animal is put through. For example, people pay exorbitant prices for securing tickets to these bull fights, which is a celebrated sport in Spain. Fun and frolicking is the only basis of their choice.
Having said that, most people do not enjoy all the blood and gory that such a sport offers. Education has given way to liberated thinkers who believe that all life-forms have equal rights to living and therefore, animals must not be harmed for the sake of entertainment. In a world where people prefer living peacefully and harmoniously with each other and are trying to inculcate these values' in their children, such form of sports have back-breaking affect in society. This calls for the law-makers to take a stand and ban such matches for the greater good.
To conclude, despite some who are only concerned of their own entertainment by participating in bloody sports, government should come forward and view such it objectively and take a hard stand to ensure that future generations thrive with love and peace rather than be exposed to such horror.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is the only basis of their choice. Having said that, most people do not enj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98461538462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6623546992 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2652642593 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218884672483 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840278909513 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614867668486 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12825798775 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667657688754 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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