Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?
Food and fitness are the two significant factors that can make or break a person. Currently, there is a hike in the count of the people who do not take healthy food and do not care about giving sufficient activities to the body. In this essay, I would like to highlight some of the reasons and remedies that needs to be addressed with regards to the above factors.
To begin with, there are a plethora of reasons for eating unhealthy food such as insufficient time, health unawareness, stressful life and cost. In this section, I will focus on two major reasons that I feel are the most vital. Firstly, insufficient time is one of the central reasons for consuming unhealthy food. Owing to this factor, many people eat what they get at that point of time to make themselves satiated. Secondly, most of the people do not have enough knowledge about the perilous effects of eating junk foods and in turn that causes a sabotage effect on their body.
Inorder to provide some enthusiasm to the people to work on their fitness, government organizations can conduct frequent sports events such as marathon and cycling and reward them. This could kindle people's interest and make them involve in some kind of physical activity. The public bodies can also arrange events like trekking and camping for those who are interested. In addition, the commercial business such as the restaurants and the supermarkets can provide some kind of concession or gift for people who seems to take care of their health.
To recapitulate, in this essay I have given some causes for taking unhealthy food and remedies that can make a healthy living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85357142857 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58053694381 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6973388813 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198608315489 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691125488627 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326236381465 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116854553579 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397818727099 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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