Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where the struggle for jobs is a heated topic and often discussed. It is commonly believed that the number of older workers who need employment compete with the younger ones for the same jobs are growing up. While this trend could trigger some issues, several viable/effective solutions could be adopted to tackle them from both individuals and the government.
Rivaling/committing with the young, the older have to face up to two main problems. One of them could be the difference in ages. The fact that young candidates have the big advantages of applying for organizations even when the senior citizens have identical abilities and experiences, which mean that they do not have the chances to take the jobs. Another drawback that the elderly are ordinarily laid off from work because of the health requirements and the capability of adapting to the changes in the digital world.
Given the aforementioned setbacks, it is highly recommended that governments and older employees employ several remedies to rectify them. One of the effective solutions is that the authorities enact laws aimed at promoting businesses to protect the rights of the elderly. As the result, they have equal employment opportunities to demonstrate themselves. On the other hand, the older should develop their self-directed learning skills to keep up with technology in the workplace.
In conclusion, the age discrimination could result in some issues, yet there would be a number of feasible methods to solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07530993844 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6631677988 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160459534449 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539033360766 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690934153982 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859391854987 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768919740183 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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