Some people say History is one of the most important subjects, Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, it is often argued that History is an important school's subject, but other believe
that, in the modern world, there are more important subject than History like Science and
Technology. This essay will discuss both aspects and draw my personal opinion.
In one hand. History subject could have some advantages for students. The first one,
learning History could help us avoiding other mistakes. For instance, Thomas Edison had
failed 999 times in order to invent the first bulb in the world. However, it become more
easier to make a bulb. The second point, History subject considered as an enjoyable subject.
Despite the other subjects, History is different. It includes stories which could be fun unlike
the others.
In the other hand, other subjects could be more beneficial than History subject. The first one
is science subject. Science subject gives the students an essential knowledge that benefits
them in their live. For example, chemistry knowledge help pharmacists creating medicines.The second one is Technology subject. Students need to learn Technology because it helps them to adjust with the modern live. For instance, people need to learn using phones to communicate with their friends and families.
To sum up. Although History is a significant subject, there are other subjects that more
important than History. Therefore, I believe that History is not as important as other subjects
like Science and Technology.
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...he first bulb in the world. However, it become more easier to make a bulb. The secon...
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...ry is not as important as other subjects like Science and Technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45175438596 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55304979392 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2823827512 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4210526316 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371253783119 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114080536444 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971981725052 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148510554956 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983139056869 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.44 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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