The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The statement here suggests that by instilling in young people a sense of cooperation instead of competition, they can be prepared in the best way for leadership in government, industry, or other fields. Although, I agree with the statement mostly, but I do not agree with the fact that a sense of competition is not required for leadership roles.
Firstly, leadership is a quality that requires an understanding of the needs of the people. One can achieve this if he or she has a sense of cooperation towards others. For example, a textile industry CEO should be able to tell if his staff is happy with their work, or whether or not all of their customers are happy. All of them may have a different set of needs, which will require the CEO to adjust a few things trying to cooperate with them.
One can take any field that requires leadership, may it be government, industry or a company developing applications, the one factor that stands out in all of these fields is that all of them have people. So if a person can understand their needs or problems by getting along with them, that not only makes people happy and encouraged, but also makes the government or industry to be at their best side.
Although, having a sense of cooperation is very important for a leader to have, we cannot ignore the fact that to become a leader one will always have competition. If a leadership role is available in government or an industry, there will always be a few people who would want to be in that position. So having a sense of competition would really help out in standing out amongst the people who would be applying for the role.
In conclusion, the best way for a society to prepare its young people for a leadership role in any field would be by instilling in them a sense of cooperation which would help making them a better leader. But, along with this, having some sense of competition is important to understand where one stands among the others in the same field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[2]
Message: Consider using 'do disagree that' or 'do agree that'.
Suggestion: do disagree that; do agree that
... agree with the statement mostly, but I do not agree with the fact that a sense of competition is not required ...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... his staff is happy with their work, or whether or not all of their customers are happy. All o...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to make' or 'make'.
Suggestion: to make; make
...a sense of cooperation which would help making them a better leader. But, along with t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60451977401 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71919325128 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446327683616 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.880978925 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376335957587 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14037239273 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152290407836 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24149878244 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152217227647 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.