The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
A nation becomes great by the perfect directions ordered by it's ruler and by preserving knowledge of artists and scientists.However, it is not that easy to conclude with a notion that rulers and artists mirror the whole nation.For that people of that very nation have to be self-dependent and solvent also.
Firstly, a nation is founded with a number of people including different interests, values, abilities and social recognition. To know the nation first and foremost we have to know the mass people. People who do not excite so much with their reputation and wealth. A nation can have leaders and artists who are famous worldwide.As an example, musicians of Pakistan are dominating Indian music industries but as a nation India has progressed way more than it's neighbor country. The reason is the mass people of India are doing great in their respective field that they surpassed Pakistan when the whole scenario is considered. Scientists invent products but failing to provide within their nation as people are not able to buy whether for high price or for the lack of knowledge to use it. Such a nation can only be tagged as a great nation, falsely.
In addition, when we consider a third world country that doesn't have a name on great nation list, can often see many such people who are rich, having international recognition, dominating the list of world's great rulers and so on. If we look at Bangladesh we will find such people who are reach and affluent enough to make an impression in first world's eye and scientists in numbers doing research in world finest of labs. Although this are inspiring, does not portray the condition of those people who are living below poverty line and surprisingly they numbered as half of the whole nation. So, again artists, rulers are failing to provide enough for a nation to become a great one.
In contrast, culture is a very important thing for a nation as without practicing it a nation can not survive long. Scientists, artists and rulers are important for a nation to progress and have a good impression in the outsiders eye. Without them a nation will subside even if they are rich enough in every prospect. Therefore, importance of those people can not be neglected either.
In conclusion, a nation is great because the normal people has made it great by their own ability and hard work. Big people are important for them to evolve but in bigger picture they justify their own greatness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, third, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84523809524 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68655318712 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492857142857 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9608856672 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.055555556 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180210163191 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650886752062 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497150779444 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11213792161 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419104588217 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.