some believe that people should not continue to work once they reach the age of retirement. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relavent examples from your experience.
From last few years, there has been massive development among the countries, but there are some issues which remains as complex as ever. One of the most controversial issues today leads to that, is it imperative; to work even after retirement or not? In this essay, I shall explore dimensions of the give statement through some assertions and examples, and shape up my viewpoint by the end.
On the one hand side, there are some people who believes that, working even after retirement would be beneficial for them. They say that, as people become lethargic and bedridden due lack of alertness and activeness, which was earlier in themselves when they used to work. They strengthen their opinion by saying that, people should continue working after retirement because, it also enhances there knowledge, keep them updated with the new advancement and technology. A good illustration to this, a survey conducted by Canadian university to see how many people are comfortable while working even after retirement, and vast majority of people agreed to work due to a similar reason of laziness among themselves.
On the other hand, there is another foremost reason, after retirement government has to provide distinct types of facilities to older people of retirement such as, medical care facilities, pension, and subsidies which makes them burden on the government. However, this leads to affect the economy, simultaneously. Moreover, this detrimental effect on economy can put a pressure on youth as well because, the people who stop working there tax is payed indirectly by the government's money. However, young adults have to work more to give more contribution into economy so they can fulfill the requirements of retired people.
To conclude, there are number of answers to this question but, I tend to believe that, I totally agree to the statement that people should work even after retirement, wherereas, it is crucial for both economy and for themselves as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ng there tax is payed indirectly by the governments money. However, young adults have to wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, then, well, while, as to, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79952562946 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7748966436 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217957300702 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789150719198 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533748284635 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137093586759 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620755354131 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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