You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
explain your situation
describe the accommodation you require
say when you will need it
Dear Matthew,
I am writing to you to avail an accommodation facility in Greenmount City, Northern Ireland. Actually, I had applied for the quarterly course over there in Standford University and had been selected. Thus, I will pursue my further studies over there and I will migrate there for some duration.
Moreover, I received the confirmation from the University last week and the courses will start soon in two weeks. To add more, I am busy with other stuff as I have to packoff from here. Therefore, I would like to request you to find a good living amenity in the mentioned city.
Secondly, the place should be nearby from my campus and should not be much costly. I would like to live solely without any sharing or roommate. The home should have good ventilation facility with wonderful ambiance. I would like to have basic equipment such as a bed, wardrobe, and study table. I hope you can get some through your references or contact.
At last, My flight will depart next week on 5th of August and I will reach my destination on 6th of August. So, I will need the stayover on 6th Noon. I will keep in touch with you to have regular updates.
Waiting for your response,
Thanks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68867924528 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55512384932 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3378078078 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2666666667 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149644680365 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502916090247 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574145932374 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821103690884 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152432754043 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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