Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
-Thank them for the photos and for the holiday;
– Explain why you didn’t write earlier;
– Invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Kathy,
I hope you are going well. I've just received the photos from our vacation that you've sent me and I'd like to thank you. It was amazing to spend some time with you and Jessica last month. My parents and my brother have already known about all places where we visited and what we did during the days.
I want to apologize for not writing you earlier. I've had so many tasks in the office that the only thing that I want when I get home is sleeping. Besides, I avoid writing at night because of my poor eyesight.
I was wondering if you'd like to see me in my country on September, 3th. I'm going to celebrate my birthday and you'll be welcomed to stay here. Moreover, you will have the opportunity to meet my family, including Bob, my dog.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Marcia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40909090909 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19373869424 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3189169624 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5833333333 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8333333333 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218697648151 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806793570194 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767409913736 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125010176451 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663677948483 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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