A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education plays an important role in transforming an individual and provides him with basic qualities and required skill set which are useful for survival. Developing a good curriculum for it is crucial for any nation as future of students depend on what they learn from schools and colleges. The author represents us with a view point that every student should study same curriculum irrespective of their until they enter college.
Having same curriculum is useful, because it provides general knowledge for every one. Though in future student may study different careers it important to learn basic skills like ethics, social, science and math. Moreover, having same curriculum also eradicates difference between education received between poor and rich. For example, students in rural areas study same subjects as other students.
Students in schools have less maturity over their future. They don’t know much about the real world, they don’t know which career to choose so having same cirriculum until college helps them, because they can decide their career when they study all general subjects choose a career which interest them the most.
Some may argue that having same cirriculum for all schools untill college is challenging for the governements because not all governments have enough budget to provide enough infrastructure required by the cirriculum and additionally, students of different regions have different interests. So, state governement should have some flexibility to modify these cirriculums.
Thus, I would like to conclude same curriculum for all students irrespective of their interests is beneficial and state government should have some flexibility over changing curriculum according their needs, and their infrastructure
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...ch interest them the most. Some may argue that having same cirriculum for all sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68421052632 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77294823279 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5317391789 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330156862145 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118388565179 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868522191416 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17908054315 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726959382342 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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