Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
More and more people are now traveling to other countries of higher educations, business or tourism. Some people think that visitors should follow the culture and traditions of their host country where they aboard while others claim that the host nation should respect cultural diversity. In my opinion, not only the visitors should adapt to the local culture but also the host country should welcome the different cultures from the world.
First, understanding the local norms and traditions of the host country brings many advantages to the visitors. For international students, they can avoid cultural shocks when they need to stay for a long time in a different country, and meanwhile, for the tourists, it will help them feel comfortable and safe with local inhabitants. For example, in North Korea, photos of the military and military checkpoints are strictly prohibited. So, if people do not know this culture, they will be put in prison or be killed immediately. Furthermore, visitors have better chances of blending themselves with the local community, and also enjoy a greater degree of acceptance. The more visitors give respect to the customs, the more they will receive love and kindness from the local inhabitants.
On the other side, it may be difficult for the visitors to adapt to the local culture, so the host country has responsibilities to show a welcome friendly. Besides, culture diversity brings many advantages to the host country from its culture to the national economy. First, it creates an international environment inside the country and consequently, when people who come from the host country visit another country, they will not meet cultural shocks. Another benefit of embracing diversity is that it makes the life more colorful. When people belonging in different cultures live together in one place, they will have an opportunity to share the variety of kinds of music, festivals, and learn several languages. Finally, economically speaking, the more visitors will come, the national economy is also improved and will spread the information about that country to international friends. A good example is the US where is home to all the world. Their growth rates are a result of their willingness to welcome talent people without respect of their cultural backgrounds.
To sum up, I believe both the visitors and hosts should welcome cultural differences. Culture diversity has many benefits not only in the own host culture but also its economy, but this should not be the expense of the local culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.199513382 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77110475342 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476885644769 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7826433339 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.473684211 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366404176025 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121089850343 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117942405845 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269771878786 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137477496561 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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