Measures have been put in place to improve road safety by reducing the speed limits. Some people believe there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The development of road infrastructures has made road accidents escalated considerably during past few years and speed limts were droped down in order to control the situation. However some argue that it is insufficient to ensure the road safty where better substitues avilable. This essay intend to discuss both aspects and evaluate accordingly.
To begin with, main reasons behind speed related accidents are drivers lose control of the vehicle and they don't have enough time to react to the unexpected incident because of the speed. Reducing the speed limit have a high impact on avoiding these type of accident due to it hugly give drivers enough time to stop collisions. Moreover, eventhough if any unfortunate incident happened damage will be minimal.
However, there are many other counter meassures that can be taken to make roads are safer place such as, installation of CCTV cameras, traffic light systems, enforcing new rules and regualtions, increasing fines. With these implementations all the users will use roads with extream care, where they don't want to be film or fined by the law. And also the traffic lights will be able regulate the traffic congessions make drivers more disciplined.
In my opinion I believe that implenting single solution will not adequate to enhance road safty where we need to look for serveral viable solutions. Along with above actions relevant authorities must conduct awareness sessions, media campaings to drivers as well as pedestrians regarding the safty messurements on the roads. Another important factor which should take into account is drivers health conditions. They must regularly under go medical checkups for any serious health concerns which can lead to tragic road accidents.
In conclusion, when considering all the facts above, by partially agreeing to the second statement there are equally good alternative solutions available to make road fearfree place for its users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: undergo
... health conditions. They must regularly under go medical checkups for any serious health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3868852459 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74919547979 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681967213115 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9457723149 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14954127163 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470323527983 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384871334222 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075828078438 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414953334156 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.