Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, every person use social media on the internet. There have many negative impact on personally and social. I agree with that statement, my opinion is reveal in following discussion.
To embark with, there are several reasons which effect on masses. Firstly, mortals use social media everytime they do not give attention there work. For example, learners not focus on there study. They use social media whenever they free. Also, youngsters who are jobholder they not achieve there target on particular duration.
Secondly, they forgot family time because in modern era, every person like to make new friends on social media and they increasing froud chance.
Furthermore, they effect on society because few masses create dangerous challenges on social media which infulance bad impact on them.
Overall, there are numerous reasons which give negative impact on society and individual. They do not achieve there goal. While, they are addicted towards social media such as what's app, facebook and YouTube.
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...ntion there work. For example, learners not focus on there study. They use socia...
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...dia whenever they free. Also, youngsters who are jobholder they not achieve there...
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...e addicted towards social media such as whats app, facebook and YouTube.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38364779874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36767185669 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.043609338 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8461538462 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2307692308 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148228145491 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661816984315 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791435211158 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952116757219 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669577797231 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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