Nowadays people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The future concept of migration is popularising in this modern world. Growing phenomena at one point segregate the families whereas on the other hand enable people to explore their skill in other countries to provide bright to their children. This essay will discuss both views followed by personal opinion.
Migration is one of the complex decision which require huge amount of finance and emotional strength. People usually prefer either to move alone or with immediate family so they can settle with minimum hassle. This leaves behind their extended family such as parents and grand parents. According to a survey by WHO that is World Health Organisation, 80% of children who are suffering from anxiety and depression reveal that primary cause of their stress is living apart from their parents.Thus, it is clear that migration creates distances among families and as result children of these families suffer from mental stresses.
On contrary to this, there are the people who believe that migration help them to gain more income that will befit their family. A recent study by Ministry of Finance of Pakistan elaborate that remittances of foreign Pakistanis are 300% higher than average income of one Pakistani.Hence, it can be concluded that migration eventually improve the quality of life of individual & families.
To conclude, moving for the purpose of work is increasingly common these days. Though it separate families; however, it enable people to improve their life. I strongly believe that migration help people to create better future for themselves and the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, thus, whereas, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63923908824 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8436856996 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287922579727 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981827089992 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558317961759 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16979791829 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568350640827 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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