Travel to study is overrated; we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies?
Nowadays, many people prefer abroad universities to acquire higher degrees although every country has international universities. However, in my perspective, achieving higher education abroad not only impart courses but also provides an opportunity to learn overall aspects of next place.
Nonetheless everything is available in the internet, learning in hand produce a real experience. While travelling overseas to study, students get an opportunity to study other aspects of that place besides curricula: culture, weather, etc. In a survey conducted by overseas.com among the five thouands students travelling USA, almost cent percentage responded that they learnt numerous lessons beyond courses during their stay which was impossible to learn inexact without being to that place.
Secondly, travelling abroad provides other by-opportunities, such as settlement. Numerous people who go next place for the education start job thereby and slowly they start living there. All such activities are pushing the globalization and decreasing the political divison among countries. In a street study conducted at the st.Meb.501 station of Melbourne, people from differnet 47 countries walked along the footpath in an hour.
In a nutshell, travelling overseas to study does not impart formal degrees only but provides an environment to learn different lesson which are fruitful to an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...learn overall aspects of next place. Nonetheless everything is available in the internet...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meb
.... In a street study conducted at the st.Meb.501 station of Melbourne, people from d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86274509804 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03198063556 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661764705882 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1066874233 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161636296123 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587298205886 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495899514028 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980772304247 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376580541267 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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