Many people believe that inherent talent is more important than practice in many fields like sport, or music, according to them. Great musicians and sportsmen are born and cannot be created. However, others claim that talent has little to do with success and any child can be taught to become a great sport person or musician.
Not all humans are born with certain talents, for example sports, music, or dance. However, it has been said that we can be taught to develop those talents since we’re young.
Generally, people do master various skills and talents. They’re either born with it because it could run from the family genes, or they’re taught since they were a child and master it overtime. In one case, a research found that although you weren’t able to sing, the more frequent practice the more people are able to belt out the notes well. Singing is a common habit or activity they do simply without any complicated things to own. The only instrument we need is our own voice, so it is not unusual that some pick singer as an occupation.
It is possible to develop a talent, though we’re not born with it. Learn it regularly is the key to make such thing could possibly happen. Our brain will memoruze significant knowledge or physical activities learnt and they will get used to it. If we repeat the process, which is learning, over and over, then our brain can easily send signals for what we’ve learnt for an amount of time and develop our soft skills, then hard skills.
In conclusion, to own such skills or talents although not born with it, we can still master one as long as we have the ambition to learn.
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- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
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- Some people spend their lives working and have little interest in their leisure and hobbies. Others spend their time on leisure and hobbies.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...regularly is the key to make such thing could possibly happen. Our brain will memoruze signifi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69658119658 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44561340169 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2947374198 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116148449213 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496862527267 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433876862799 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825037787374 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332440823977 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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