SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Shifting the headquarters of one company from one place to a totally different city on the basis of many obscure assumptions is absurd. SuperCorp clearly made the super flawed decision based on various baseless assumptions such as.
SuperCorp considers the surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville indicates that it is superior place to live than Middlesburg. This assumption is clearly ambiguous due to various reasons like surge may be the reason of the family members returning to their families after being away from town, neighbourhood might be country side and people prefer semi-urban culture for better exposure and facilities. Since the argument doesn't consider the exact statistics numbers we cannot conclude anything with sureity.However, if SuperCorp might have conducted it's serious survey it might have been more helpful for laying more solid ground for the decision.
How can the SuperCorp is so sure that the vague employee survey can be so easily trusted about its employees willing to work in less urban area this is clearly an absurd assumption. Also, they haven't considered the exact stats, it is possible that the number of workers prefering less urban area might be very less in number and might be just saying vaguely also they might well have adopted themselves in the urban setting and now might not want to switch the regions.Further SuperCorp consideres that Corporateville is better than Middlesburg just on the basis of urban and not urban. Since, every city has its own value one must not be judging on handful of ambiguous evidences.
SuperCorp also consideres that tax rates are low in Corporateville than Middlesbourg how can they conclude this without having any concrete evidance on the tax regime in both areas. There is a possibility that some taxes might be less and many other will be high so the consideration that Corporateville is cheap and safe place to work is truly vague.
In conclusion I want to stand my ground by saying that the decision that SuperCorp has made to shift its headquarters from Middlesburg to Corporateville is truly absurd. By relying on handful of vague evidences one must not conclude that the one thing is better than other.In other words SuperCorp might have employed more reliable surveys, collected more statistical data on tax regimes, etc to strengthen their argument for the move.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Since the argument doesn't consider the exact statistics numbers we cannot conclude anything with sureity.However, if SuperCorp might have conducted it's serious survey it might have been more helpful for laying more solid ground for the decision.
Error: sureity Suggestion: surety
Sentence: Also, they haven't considered the exact stats, it is possible that the number of workers prefering less urban area might be very less in number and might be just saying vaguely also they might well have adopted themselves in the urban setting and now might not want to switch the regions.Further SuperCorp consideres that Corporateville is better than Middlesburg just on the basis of urban and not urban.
Error: consideres Suggestion: considers
Error: prefering Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: SuperCorp also consideres that tax rates are low in Corporateville than Middlesbourg how can they conclude this without having any concrete evidance on the tax regime in both areas.
Error: evidance Suggestion: evidence
Error: consideres Suggestion: considers
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 392 350
No. of Characters: 1954 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.45 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.985 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.725 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.522 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.375 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.063 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ure for better exposure and facilities. Since the argument doesnt consider the exact ...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sure and facilities. Since the argument doesnt consider the exact statistics numbers w...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...e cannot conclude anything with sureity.However, if SuperCorp might have conducted its ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...learly an absurd assumption. Also, they havent considered the exact stats, it is possi...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...prefering less urban area might be very less in number and might be just saying vaguely also t...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Further
...ow might not want to switch the regions.Further SuperCorp consideres that Corporatevill...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...st on the basis of urban and not urban. Since, every city has its own value one must ...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ift its headquarters from Middlesburg to Corporateville is truly absurd. By relyi...
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Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...that the one thing is better than other.In other words SuperCorp might have employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14470284238 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85292616139 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514211886305 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8179013469 57.8364921388 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.916666667 119.503703932 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 23.324526521 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207215257086 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102241534681 0.0743258471296 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120019089125 0.0701772020484 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121743390808 0.128457276422 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381236489707 0.0628817314937 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.3799401198 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.3550499002 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.197005988 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 98.500998004 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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