To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is indeed very important to understand the characterstics of the society as they will surely help us to develop an outline of the nation. Hence considering this argument I'll not support the given notion of the statement i.e. according to me one must give equal importance to every city be it major or minor or even it's countryside.
In our modern society there is a notion that important characterstics of society are mainly found in it's major cities . However,this is totally an absurd conclusion to make as we clearly see that more than half of the population of the major cities are migrants from the small cities, towns , or even countryside. These people create a diverse society in the so called "major"city . People while migrating carry with them their cultures, traditions. These people are mostly young and often take their parents along with them, hence increasing the importance of the society by imparting their wisdom hence increasing the overall wit of the society.
Also,in order to understand the important qualities of society one must be aware about it's roots i.e. it's small cities/towns countryside as these are the people who will be creating a base for the major cities to develop their culture.For example we must see that the social mannerisms are being developed throughout the world from the rubble only, consider the early human life how they transformed their lives from being socially awkward to highly intelligent beings capable of inventing even most unimaginable technologies like artificial intelligence, nanotechnology,etc.
However, we must not ignore the fact that these people from small towns often create a diverse natured society which indeed is a part of our major cities.Also, major cities are the reflection of the ateqquites being developed in the small areas.
In conclusion , I must say that in order to identify important characterstics of a society one must not ignore the contributions of the small town/ cities or even countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22049689441 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08630575686 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512422360248 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.505531023 60.3974514979 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.1 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151898185652 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661109116084 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293298408635 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957071992412 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00993798361059 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.